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You were (a parenthesis, that paused
the daily, mundane stuff
of life;
a bundled breath
of fresh joy,
and borne in the wonder
of love.

Gasping and grasping,
'til in quiet you laid
still;
and I, my Child,
lie in quiet, still
tears).

And now, that is all you are,
and still so much more.
Ever seen a premature baby take its last breaths? Let's hope the answer is a no and stays that way :)

All critiques welcome :)

UPDATE: 19/01

Thanks so much for all your faves and watches guys. I REALLY appreciate it. It's humbling and encouraging getting this sorta recognition

A BIG thank you to ^NicSwaner for suggesting my piece for the DD. *salute*
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A Parenthesis is a beginning without an end. Powerful words from ~changers-n-mash of a moment that should be embraced as parenthood, that is now parenthetical. ( Featured by Nichrysalis )